In Cultivating World with Rinnegan

to be honest it's quite good, actually it's so good in fact that it probably better than your other novel. of specifically the other translation. I see you improved on your translation work with this level and I'm quite enjoying it. keep going 😄

Read up to Chapter 18 and this shit has a lot of potential. I've read a fuck ton of "Extra" novels and tho this ain't the best (TNE and Reborn as an Extra exists) it is still a solid read. The updating stability is also good with at least 1 chapter per day. His "Bloodline of Sacrifice" is also interesting and I don't think I've ever seen anything like it before (maybe I have but forgot, who knows?). Anyways lance don't you dare lock this shit at chapter 20 or some shit {be more like pancakes and just don't lock it :D}

ew year to

" You get bitten by the zombie" said Lily in a serious face. " You didn't turn in to a zombie" she continues. I never see her face like that before. I didn't believe them, my brother walks up to me and he grabs my hand and said: " look at this scar, this is the scar." The scar really looks like a bit from a zombie but I didn't feel any hurt.

Simon Pov

This is so confusing... Is he Beni or Novi? Is the MC a he or a she? Hotel maid? This is so confusing.... please at least give us the link to the original.

          Splender man is the same as the slender man family but splender is not like the rest of the family. Splender is like laughing Jack but he keeps children and has fun with them plays with them and plays games with them, Splender is the definition of fun his suit is rainbow dotted and his top hat is the same color as his suit.

Fan shi disappeared with the Kings pointed out by the Emperor.